A new character I'm coming up with. Any and all feedback would be appreciated. Also, if there are any who would like to come up with some art work to show how you picture this character, you have my permission to do so, so long as you give credit of this character.
Name: Quin'Len Vaus
Race: Human/Darkelf Hybrid
Age: Mid eighties to late nineties
Favored Weapon(s): Bow/Arrow, Short Sword, Dagger
Skin Color: Grey (Almost blue)
Hair Color: Black
Eye Color: Red
This young elf maybe beautiful to the mortal eye, but she's not one to be trifled with. She's done more than her fair share of evil in her young elf age and she's not afraid to show it.
When she was little more than a decade old, her parents were brutally butchered in front of her, and the killer was no less merciful as he took pleasure in raping her before leaving her for dead. Since than, she panted a target on this mans head.
After she recovered from this nightmare she went through the most brutal of trainings from a number of masters who would accept her. As she trained, she took small jobs like bounty hunting, prostitution and even pest control in order to pay for training, food, cloths and weapons. After a number of decades she set out to find that target she painted.
With little effort, she found the man that destroyed her innocence and she showed him the same amount of suffering he caused not only her, but the number of those she heard was touched by this man's hand. Only when she had him begging for mercy she stopped if only to smile at him to show him the devil he created and continued to torture him until he finally couldn't handle the pain anymore.
After she ended the man who caused so much suffering she set out to continue to show the same suffering other's pushed on the world. She held nothing back.
If you were someone who caused suffering you best hope you don't hear that she's in town.